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I hope for this year
this time and this place
will never be looked at
in a glass case

The sun, sky and moon
floating lazily by
must look down on us
and continouly cry

All we needed
was food water and air
but look at us now
we created our own despair
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Submitted: September 6, 2006
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when i wrote this, i was thinking about the sun, how it moves all the time, looking down at us and I thought about all the new housing thats going on and I was sad so heres my tree lovin' poem
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thanks...i kind of wrote it on the spot, so I expect there to be errors, but i still like it
It's so purdy! I can't write peotry for the life of me. xD You have de gift!

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"Inside every living person is a dead person waiting to get out..."
aaaawwww....thats great kels...!=^.^=

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;) im a loser with no life ;)
Amazingly reflective and beautiful!!!~

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"Live as if everyone is watching!" - Truman

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